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He askedHe asked me if i wanted to live
over and over
gun coming closer
face jeering at my tears
little did he know
i wasnt crying out of fear
no
i was crying
because
I didnt know what to tell him.

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A Suicide Note

by !BombPrincess, Dec 7, 2011, 6:31:46 AM
Literature / Poetry / Transgressive / Traditional Fixed Forms

My body is a vessel:
It is only flesh and bone.
I'll go where you can't follow,
And I will go alone.
It's not that I'm not happy here,
I've simply found I have no fear,
And I want to know what is unknown;
I am prepared to walk that road.

A Suicide Noteby !BombPrincess

Literature / Poetry / Transgressive / Traditional Fixed Forms

Written when I was going through a phase.
Yes, I wanted to commit suicide, but I also knew at the time that I would never do it because of my love for my family.

I wrote this poem because I was trying to think of something to write that would comfort my little brother, if I were to ever do it. Of course, I never showed it to him.

~eternallyendure Dec 8, 2011 Hobbyist Interface Designer

I'll go where you can't follow,.....the walk is mostly alone.

!BombPrincess Dec 8, 2011 Hobbyist General Artist

I don't understand what you're getting at...?

~eternallyendure Dec 9, 2011 Hobbyist Interface Designer

well...basically I guess wat i was trying to say is that at difficult times one finds how lone he is , people turn their back, and the frustration and pain give rise to a strength and determination to make it through that can be little surprising.

I am terrible at expressing but thats how i felt when I read that line.

!BombPrincess Dec 10, 2011 Hobbyist General Artist

Haha, it's fine. I like it more now that I know what you meant.

~eternallyendure Dec 11, 2011 Hobbyist Interface Designer

phewww thanks

~Izzyosaur Dec 7, 2011 Hobbyist General Artist

This is beautiful in its simplicity.

!BombPrincess Dec 7, 2011 Hobbyist General Artist

Thank you. That's good to hear.

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